Brave Heart 'welcome letter' draft - feedback welcome
12-23-2019, 11:52 AM
(12-19-2019, 02:04 PM)Luke Wrote: I am very thankful for the feedback. Here is the problem, I totally understand all you guys wrote, and I will try to incorporate as much as possible, but all I have to work with is a small sheet of paper that still has to be printed in ~font 10 at the very least. I'll redraft tomorrow evening (packing for travel and traveling tomorrow), and reupload a new version -- let's see how much I can cover in the limited space I've got.
Thank you again!
luke , you have to trim that verbose intro , to gain space , or put a link on it , to a longer post on line, where you can waffle
