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RE: Brave Heart 'welcome letter' draft - feedback welcome - bcnaz - 12-22-2019 IS the factory Test software something we can actually 'play' with ? Testing the Wi-Fi, or other components ? Before we install an OS ? Just Curious... RE: Brave Heart 'welcome letter' draft - feedback welcome - Luke - 12-23-2019 @zaius good job. Could you redo links you wrote per @pfeerick 's suggestion? I'll yank that and email to TL tonight. RE: Brave Heart 'welcome letter' draft - feedback welcome - Luke - 12-23-2019 (12-22-2019, 07:00 PM)bcnaz Wrote: IS the factory Test software something we can actually 'play' with ? Testing the Wi-Fi, or other components ? Before we install an OS ? Yea, it has an auto-test function, which checks off components in a list format, as well as some calibration tools. For those with dev phones and interested - download link. RE: Brave Heart 'welcome letter' draft - feedback welcome - colin hodsdon - 12-23-2019 (12-19-2019, 02:04 PM)Luke Wrote: I am very thankful for the feedback. Here is the problem, I totally understand all you guys wrote, and I will try to incorporate as much as possible, but all I have to work with is a small sheet of paper that still has to be printed in ~font 10 at the very least. I'll redraft tomorrow evening (packing for travel and traveling tomorrow), and reupload a new version -- let's see how much I can cover in the limited space I've got. luke , you have to trim that verbose intro , to gain space , or put a link on it , to a longer post on line, where you can waffle RE: Brave Heart 'welcome letter' draft - feedback welcome - zaius - 12-24-2019 (12-23-2019, 08:54 AM)Luke Wrote: @zaius good job. Could you redo links you wrote per @pfeerick 's suggestion? I'll yank that and email to TL tonight. Sorry, I wasn't here yesterday, so I'm thinking you fixed it yourself and sent it already. Yes, I should have made the links consistent Honestly, I didn't have much time to spend on it. RE: Brave Heart 'welcome letter' draft - feedback welcome - Luke - 12-24-2019 Done and done! thanks for the feedback everyone! RE: Brave Heart 'welcome letter' draft - feedback welcome - pfeerick - 12-25-2019 (12-24-2019, 12:13 PM)zaius Wrote: Yes, I should have made the links consistent Honestly, I didn't have much time to spend on it. Was just a suggestion You did an excellent re-write... thanks, and Merry Christmas! |